Comments: response posts

I enjoyed reading the comments that everyone made in response to a classmate's post. Some of you highlighted aspects that I had not crossed my mind.  Nicely done! I look forward to more thoughtful writing throughout the semester.

There was improvement from the first to the second CARS, which is excellent to see. Good job. I challenge you to look for scholarly work beyond the textbook to enhance your analysis.
A couple of common APA errors:

1. In-text citations should include all authors, if there are less than 6. So, the in-text citation should be (Gill & Williams, 2008). 
2. If you use a direct quote, you need to include a page number.